Oye. Sorrow, what are you here to show me? Oye!
First, that you are alive.
Second, your capacity for joy.
- Inspired by the one and only, Khalil Gibran.
Writing
Fall like snow on tall peaks
There are laws followed by falling things
not humans
but things cannot determine the conditions of their fall
humans can.
Since childhood I was advised, if you want to fall, fall inside the house. ie. not outside
ie. fall onto the letter but escape from the envelope
ie. fall into the eye but escape from the glasses
ie. escape from words but fall into the meaning.
I, of average height could not have fallen more than five and a half feet
but how high was that?
My falling is not coming to an end.
The reality of falling things is revealing itself to me
in the middle of my 70th decade.
Look around and observe the falling of things.
fall like the snow atop glaciers from where sweet rivers erupt
fall like a sip of cold water on a dry throat
fall like drops filling a clay pot with music
fall like a teardrop in someone’s sorrow
fall like a ball amongst children playing
fall like the first leaf in autumn making space for a new one in spring
for if there’s no autumn, there’s no spring
fall like the first brick in the foundation of a home
fall like a waterfall on a turbine setting its fans in motion
fall like light on darkness
fall like sunlight on moist winds, making rainbows.
But stop.
Up until now only rainbows have been drawn.
No arrows have been drawn from rainbows.
So, fall like an arrow of a rainbow
onto barren earth and
cover it with flowers and leaves.
Fall like rain on parched land.
Like a ripe fruit,
fall and offer your seeds to the ground.
My hair has fallen.
So have my teeth.
And my vision.
The shells of memories continue to fall.
Names. Dates. Towns. Faces.
The pace of blood-flow in my body is falling.
My temperature is falling.
Why are you still standing, Naresh?
Before all of your existence collapses
for once
make a decision about your fall,
the correct cause and timing of it, and fall on an enemy
like lightning
like a meteorite
like a warrior
like thunderbolt.
I say, fall.
- An excerpt from a poem by Naresh Saxena. (Translated from Hindi, by me. It is customary for Urdu and Hindi poets to insert their pen-name into the last verse of their poems. I enjoyed the instructional tone of his voice and the ebb and flow of all his metaphors.)
Vincent and James.
2017 – 16. Male. RIP.
2024 – 19. Male. RIP.
Brothers. Second generation Chinese immigrants in USA. Their mother, a writer who lost both of them to suicide.
Where Reasons End (2019) by Yiyun Li, after Vincent’s death.
I read this book when it was first published. An imagined conversation between her and her older son, Vincent who lived ‘feelingly’. Sixteen chapters, one for each year of his life. It has a witty and mischievous tone. Nicholai, a name he gave himself, chides his mother’s new embrace of cliches and adjectives. “If you’re protesting by becoming a bad writer, I would say it’s highly unnecessary,” he says. (“Dying is highly unnecessary too,” she shoots back.)
Things In Nature Merely Grow – Pulitzer Prize Finalist 2025, by Yiyun Li, a memoir. She wrote it within two months of her younger son, James’ death. I feel deeply for her and with her but I am not sure I want to read that book right now. A few lines from it sing true:
“I am in an abyss. If an abyss is where I shall be for the rest of my life, the abyss is my habitat.”
“My children were not my burden. My sadness is not my burden.”
“I am very realistic in that I would always acknowledge that I am limited as their mother. I was limited, and I am still limited as a mother, so I can only do my best.”
When people hold an expectation that her grief must have an end date, she retorts, “How lonely the dead would feel, if the living were to stand up from death’s shadow, clap their hands, dust their pants, and say to themselves and to the world, I am done with my grieving; from this point on its life as usual, business as usual.”
“This is a very sad fact of our lives, they took their own lives knowing we would accept and respect their decision.”
Could I accept and respect Saagar’s decision one hundred percent? I believe it was not his decision. It was his utter helplessness and desperation in the face of his illness, his unsuitable antidepressants, lack of medical care, his isolation, his inability to recommence his education, our inability to talk about it and so much more. He was driven to it. It was not by choice. Anyone who knew him, knows that. I do understand though.
I understand, my darling.
References:
https://www.theguardian.com/books/2019/feb/05/where-reasons-end-yiyun-li-review#
https://www.theguardian.com/books/2025/may/17/author-yiyun-li-on-the-suicide-of-both-her-sons
Stories are us.
Why are they here? These random strange-looking foreigners? One is white and the other we’re told is from the north of India. Wonder which is worse. At least one of them is easy to steel from. Surely the other is obnoxious. But she teaches English at the Primary school for free. Wonder what’s in it for her. Oh yes. She’s using our kids to learn Kannada for free. That must be it.
The minds of the villagers are desperately trying to make sense of what we’re doing here, in this remote village. The nearest airport is 5 hours’ drive away and the closest decent hospital, at least an hour from our village. We don’t speak the local language and hardly anyone speaks Hindi or English.
The first story of us was that I am a film director and Si, an actor. We’re scouting a suitable location to shoot a period drama. But then no camera or crew showed up. So, that was discarded.
The next tale was that we are here to set up a petrol station. That’s how people with connections in high places syphon off their black money. That fits, they believed, knowing nothing about us. But then no signs of construction appeared for months.
The next guess was that we want to open a bar and restaurant. As we are close to the highway, it’s a great place to open-up something for the travellers to rest and refresh. That didn’t seem to be happening either.
What can it be? Oh. They both have seriously grey hair. All their friends must be old. They must deeply empathise with old people. They must be planning an old people’s home. Well, no signs of that yet.
What are they about after all? The dogs and kids seem to love them. They seem like nice enough people. Maybe they’re planning to start an orphanage? Don’t know. We’ll have to wait and watch.
Well, all they seem to be doing is planting more trees and making more compost and playing music to their plants, setting up irrigation systems and so on. Maybe they’re doing all the groundwork to ultimately grow cannabis.
Oh! How we need stories!
Writing cues…
I don’t like to gossip but…
I shouldn’t really say this but…
I’m really sorry but…
It’s none of my business but…
I don’t mean to be difficult but…
I know this sounds judgmental but…
I don’t mean to pry but …
I know it’s selfish but …
I don’t think you’re fat but …
I don’t mean this to be offensive but…
My husband is a real darling but…
I’m not a racist but…
I know it’s awkward but…
Everyone loves my dad but…
I think she’s adorable but …
It’s not about how old you are but…
So many years have passed but… I was invited to speak at a national conference last month. I said yes.
National Confidential Inquiry into Suicide and Safety in Mental health (NCISH) 11th Annual conference on the 8th of May 2025 at 10 am UK time. This year the focus is on people who had been in contact with Mental Health services within a year of their death. It’s free, short and online.
Delegates booklet: Delegate Booklet
Recent report: Recent NCISH Report.
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